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Hi Dpg, Yep, that's how this idea came up in the first place. The separations of families and handling of the crisis in general has been inspiring (sadly). I'll play around with the action/plan. Obviously the disobey/abandon/defy his orders pits…
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Hi Dpg, Thank you. You're right, 'abandon' feels passive - as if he could simply ignore his orders without consequence. How about 'disobey'? I see your point about the refugee status, since I haven't made it clear that things aren't…
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Hi Richiev, thanks for the input!? I guess I fell into the trap of trying to explain the setting. You guessed indeed that the daughter element is going to involve death. I was trying to shoe-horn it in there, and…