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Following a career-defining launch of a state of the art submarine, a high-ranking U. S. government official finds her life turned upside down after she learns that her estranged husband is hunting her.
Although the story is unclear, I like the building blocks i.e.? in spite of her great achievements and in spite of the fact that she works for the most world's powerful military machine, she is a fearful of one man…
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“When he discovers his father will be fired as coach if he doesn’t bring home a championship, a popular quarterback must rally his good looking and talented team to beat the scruffy, overachieving, underdogs that, every year seem to defeat them in the final game.”
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Great idea, with huge comedy potential. My only suggestion is to think about what his internal journey will be (i.e. how the quarterback will change). I don't know if that necessarily needs to be in the logline, but something you…
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Forced out on his own for the first time, a mentally-challenged man with impulse control problems must prove to himself he can overcome his limitations and achieve his dream of a “normal” life.
I like the idea, but agree with most of the comments above that you need to be more specific. I think that you should focus on how he can overcome his limitations. Is there an event, is there something he…
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Dying single father on the run from his criminal past must come to grips with series of choices that led him to commit murder in order to procure a new suitable home for his young son with special needs.
I suggest you be more specific about his inner goal: "must come to grips with series of choices".? Also, it's hard to tell whether the murder occurs in the movie or whether that is the 'criminal past' being referred to.…
