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on this hour long dramatic comedy will follow a lesbian Native American Indian who found refuge in the city that never sleeps after being exiled from her reservation not only due to her sexuality, but for having a child out of wedlock…

As of right now, I currently have the first episode ending in present day NY with Character A as she's listening to a voicemail that was left for her earlier in the day- at first it seems as if the…
on this hour long dramatic comedy will follow a lesbian Native American Indian who found refuge in the city that never sleeps after being exiled from her reservation not only due to her sexuality, but for having a child out of wedlock…

I can't thank you enough for the help- I've been working on the scripts for this series for the past year, but the logline is what I'm seriously having difficulties with... The reason I claim this is a dramatic comedy…
on Seduced into a world of drugs, sex, and money after abandoning her loved ones, model-slash-actress hopeful must determine if losing herself, is worth it to become a star.

The issue is that I don't want the audience to know that the dancer is Karl until later on in the season (approximately episode 3 or 4) but there will be clues (his cell phone cover matches the cell phone…
on Seduced into a world of drugs, sex, and money after abandoning her loved ones, model-slash-actress hopeful must determine if losing herself, is worth it to become a star.

Have any of you seen the show mixology(Netflix)? I love the way the storylines flow (as elementary as the show is) A more mature example would be that of the movie Crash. Both of these are shot in chron order…
on Seduced into a world of drugs, sex, and money after abandoning her loved ones, model-slash-actress hopeful must determine if losing herself, is worth it to become a star.

I know we've been going back and forth a bit but I'd really like to start this off by thanking all of you for your help (and also not making me feel like an absolute idiot). So thanks everyone :)…
on Seduced into a world of drugs, sex, and money after abandoning her loved ones, model-slash-actress hopeful must determine if losing herself, is worth it to become a star.

In the first episode the Indonesian woman is meeting, let's call the other character Karl. Indonesia meets Karl after Sofie (person three) explains that Karl is really is.... This is an portion of the pilot script. * SOFIE Well you…
on Seduced into a world of drugs, sex, and money after abandoning her loved ones, model-slash-actress hopeful must determine if losing herself, is worth it to become a star.

I have four main charecters however three are only introduced in the first episode.
on Seduced into a world of drugs, sex, and money after abandoning her loved ones, model-slash-actress hopeful must determine if losing herself, is worth it to become a star.

There is a "fifth" character- this one isn't truly introduced because he is already one of the main charecters. The beginning of episode two shows this fifth person essentially giving a blowjob in exchange for drugs, we do not see…
on Seduced into a world of drugs, sex, and money after abandoning her loved ones, model-slash-actress hopeful must determine if losing herself, is worth it to become a star.

Although I've been writing since I could hold a pen, this is my very first attempt at writing for a TV series... We HAVE a lesbian who maintains a relationship with an older gentleman that pays her bills without having…