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on As a fascist state that controls the GMO tech that feeds the population seeks to secure its hold on power, the poorer farmers and climate refugees in the south embark on a secret mission to get back natural seeds from a heavily fortified island.

Many thanks for the input. The missing elements are in my notes - just not yet in the logline. The update looks like this: Valour is left to lead a ragged band of survivors to raid a remote seed bank,…
on As a fascist state that controls the GMO tech that feeds the population seeks to secure its hold on power, the poorer farmers and climate refugees in the south embark on a secret mission to get back natural seeds from a heavily fortified island.

Thanks for all the great comments everybody! I think this is starting to work: Valour leads a ragged band of survivors to raid the heavily guarded seed bank, in a last ditch attempt to win back their future before Subas,…
on When a young man with a tendency to say the wrong thing at the worst moment discovers an alternate universe where everyone says exactly what they mean, he finally feels like he can fit in, but as he loses track of which reality is which, he risks losing his job, his friends and the girl he has been trying so hard to win over.

Less is indeed more. Though using two sentences feels like cheating. "When a guy with a big mouth discovers an alternate universe where everyone says exactly what they mean, he finally feels like he fits in, but as he loses…