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When a businessman sells up to recover from debilitating injury, he embarks on an apparently simple quest to trace the origin of a family heirloom.

April 22, 2018
Rework: After an interstellar super-freighter goes missing and crew are murdered, an exasperated Homicide Investigator must overcome personal and professional obstacles to solve the whole case.

July 5, 2017
Question: I suspect that most people here, like me, struggle to focus on the part of their story that’s important to logline. Mine is a complex of murders, mainly focused around concealing a galactic insurance fraud but including some revenge attempts by the contract killer. From MC’s perspective, there are multiple murders, a possible insurance fraud, the prime murderer is specifically after him and/or his family for revenge… Can people please suggest how to choose which elements/plot lines to logline and which to leave for the synopsis. e.g. in the movie “UP”, which is the more important: Carl reaching the Falls to fulfil his promise, Carl’s redemption, Carl speudo-adopting Russell.. etc.

June 14, 2017
Rework: As Galactic Police become victims in a series of murders, the frazzled Investigator must catch the contract killer and the secretive mastermind, to protect his own family.

June 13, 2017
Rework: When cops are killed in a series of murders, the investigator must catch the contract killer and his employer before they get to his family.

June 11, 2017
Rework: When two cops, and a witness in a space piracy case, are murdered, the determined Homicide Detective must solve the piracy fraud to catch the killer and the fraud mastermind.

June 8, 2017
When cops and a witness are murdered, a determined Homicide Detective must solve a space piracy case to find their killer and the controlling mastermind.

June 4, 2017
Rework: When a witness and two cops are killed, a tenacious Homicide Detective must defeat his contract-killer nemesis to capture the unknown mastermind.

May 29, 2017
Rework: When a witness and two cops are killed, a divorced Homicide Detective must solve a space piracy fraud and track two murderers to capture the mastermind. Not sure of genre… Suggestions?

May 28, 2017
Rework: When a witness in custody and two cops are killed, the Homicide Detective must solve a piracy case to catch the killer and the mastermind. Thriller? Crime? Drama? Sci-Fi? Not sure…

May 25, 2017