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When a starving empire’s water mines run dry, two slave girls must revive a mythical power that could save the world.
Sure - yes the script came first :) It's just interesting to see how rearranging the elements of the logline/sentence can describe such a different story!
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When a starving empire’s water mines run dry, two slave girls must revive a mythical power that could save the world.
Thanks for the suggestion Tor Dollhouse but I'm not really sure what you're getting at - your logline may have a better sentence structure (?) but it's actually describing quite a different script to the one I've written...
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When a starving empire’s water mines run dry, two slave girls must revive a mythical power that could save the world.
Thanks for the feedback everyone, I made a couple of alterations based on your suggestions before submitting to the competition thingy :)
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When a human dies, they say that you see your life flashes before your eyes. What if you died and everything you see is the “flash of life” when you die? Death is an illusion.
One day, a man wake’s up and has deja vu’s trough the day. He sees everything that’s about to happen with him. He tries to find the answer.
While I like philosophical explorations, it's really difficult to try and fit abstract concepts into a visual medium - it can obviously be done, but for the idea to have impact it needs to be handled with precision so that…
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A disgraced cop pursues the serial killer who murdered his partner ten years ago, has resurfaced, and is killing again.
Succinct, immediately identifiable narrative. Perhaps too familiar - I'm sure I've already seen this film! I think you could drop the "has resurfaced and is killing again" part as it's implied in the fact that the cop is pursuing him…
