“A cop and his K-9 companion unintentionally hijack a billion dollar drug shipment from a ruthless cartel that will stop at nothing to get it back.

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Stasia · Penpusher · 50 pts

Three good for nothing youths unexpectedly gain superpowers and must save their crumbling city, YGN, from complete destruction.

Former member · Singularity · 114,968 pts

Can you strip your concept down to a hook, the "secret sauce" that differentiates your story from all the other cop versus drug lords movies that have already been made? ?As I presume you are all too well aware, there is a surfeit of them. (The last one to impress me was "Sicarrio")

Which triggers me to ask: have you thought of making the cop a kick-ass female, reverse the rescue role: she has to save her boyfriend?

(When I reversed roles on a cop story I've been working on -- don't worry it's not about drug lords or drug dealing -- made the protagonist a female, the story just exploded with new possibilities. ?Possibilities that worked so much better for a female protagonist. fwiw.)