A Black Comedy/Sports Drama is about Jacob McFarland, a Football coach who had the label as “The Dirty Coach”

by joker2008 · Logliner · 140 pts July 15, 2017 518 views

Categories: Comedy

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Neer Shelter · Script Doctor · 40,115 pts July 17, 2017

What Foxtrot25 and Richiev wrote.

Also,? no need to write in the name of the film or character in the logline, again, check out the 'Formula' tab up top.

Richiev · Oracle · 58,825 pts July 16, 2017

In a logline you have a lead character
Something happens to the lead character
as a result he has a goal

For instance if, as a result of being dirty he gets kicked out of the NFL, he now has to coach 12 year old's... his goal would be, if he can win a championship with his rag tag losers he might get hired back in the NFL.
But he has a rival who purposely takes over the cross town team in order to stop him from winning.

Foxtrot25 · Maestro · 8,420 pts July 16, 2017

Please check out the formula advice on this website. From there, you can organize a basic idea of what your story is about.

Good luck.

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