A brutal assassin wins custody of his children, one of them can tell the future and they must use his gift to find a way to end their father’s gruesome acts, or their life becomes endangered.

Nope i think i'm okay with this. Thanks

Not perfect but in my opinion you are not far from there with a few modifications. Are you going to make another submission?

Does this mean this log-line is already perfect.? Someone help me out here.

Yeah you're right, the boy with the gift is actually the protagonist along with his sister, i should find a way to bring him the spotlight on him.

Thanks timmyelliot, I'll change that.

I like it.

I think it's "...their lives become..."

I like this concept a lot.

I do feel like the focus of the kid with the powers is lost because for some reason my mind keep getting drawn to the assassin.