A carefree college student attempts to host a huge party for his friends during the initial days of a zombie outbreak.

Ok.

Icebreed2006:

I have come to have a totally different take of your story, it seems. But it's your story, so I know what else to say. Except suggest that you rewind the thread and review the basic building blocks of your logline.

What is the inciting incident? (The party can be the scene of the inciting incident, but I just don't see how it can be the incident that triggers the rest of the plot.)

As a result of the inciting incident, what must the protagonist do -- or else?
Is there a ticking clock?
Is there a stakes character?

Icebreed2006:

I have come to have a totally different take of your story, it seems. But it's your story, so I know what else to say. Except suggest that you rewind the thread and review the basic building blocks of your logline.

What is the inciting incident? (The party can be the scene of the inciting incident, but I just don't see how it can be the incident that triggers the rest of the plot.)

As a result of the inciting incident, what must the protagonist do -- or else?
Is there a ticking clock?
Is there a stakes character?