A daughter struggling to come to terms with her Father’s death discovers a dangerous secret. Attracting the attention of government, and forcing her family to flee the country.

Pet peeve - "...struggling to come to terms with..." this, unfortunately, is very common in loglines and rarely works well. This description doesn't contribute a clear plot detail to the reader's understanding of the story as it's vague in nature, best to cut it and focus on the dramatic problem at hand.

What is her goal? Depending on the country, fleeing it could be relatively easy. What country are they in?

Secondly, the obstacle is unclear. What does "...Attracting the attention of government..." mean? Are they being chased by a crazed official? Are they being hunted down by a team of assassins? Their obstacle needs to be clearly described.

Agree with Richiev. ?Don't hide the game ball.

Agree with Richiev. ?Don't hide the game ball.