After a senseless violent act, a quiet man willingly risks losing his home and family relationships for love of his wife and memory of his daughter.

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sloanpeterson · Mentor · 925 pts

Way too vague for me. ?Your responses say you made changes, but maybe I'm not seeing them...

Former member · 114,968 pts

Would he have a number, because the way your logline descries the (somewhat limited) action of the script, it seems like it will end in tragedy. This could be a chance to do an inspiring never-get-me-down type screenplay (think like?Rocky?meets?Pursuit of?Happiness) instead of something seemingly quite depressing. Just food for thought about what story you are wanting to tell, and "sell".

Karel Segers · Maestro · 2,890 pts

Would he have a number, because the way your logline descries the (somewhat limited) action of the script, it seems like it will end in tragedy. This could be a chance to do an inspiring never-get-me-down type screenplay (think like?Rocky?meets?Pursuit of?Happiness) instead of something seemingly quite depressing. Just food for thought about what story you are wanting to tell, and "sell".

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