A young latina with basic english and a desire to experience independece must keep her horrible job in a American Resort and generate extra income to keep her word to return the huge invesment of trip to her parents when the season is low.

by DenniseKJ · Initiate · 55 pts October 17, 2020 14 views

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Former member · 114,968 pts October 20, 2020

>>>a desire to experience independece

Independence to do what? What, specifically, is her Big Dream?

Former member · 114,968 pts October 20, 2020

I think the premise has promise but it needs polishing and fleshing out.

kofi Agyare · Logliner · 135 pts October 19, 2020

it is missing the basic element of a log line

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