A young teen decides to run away from home in order to escape the abuses from his father.

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Mandavirmais · Logliner · 490 pts

Is there a mother? Where does he live and where does he go? When does the action takes place? Is it a flashback?

Former member · Singularity · 114,965 pts

There's a story to tell, here, about life on the mean streets.? The fate of most runaways is to jump from the frying pan into the fire.

But?"he doesn't decide to run away " - - he just runs away.? And then what?? A logline outlines a plot.? And a plot is not about deciding ,but what happens after a life changing decision is made.? Which is....?

dogger · Singularity · 87,055 pts

There's a story to tell, here, about life on the mean streets.? The fate of most runaways is to jump from the frying pan into the fire.

But?"he doesn't decide to run away " - - he just runs away.? And then what?? A logline outlines a plot.? And a plot is not about deciding ,but what happens after a life changing decision is made.? Which is....?