“After she’s attacked by demons, a teenage amnesiac must discover who or what she is, if she’s to defeat the evil horde that has targeted her.” — Fallen Angel–

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Judah Ray · Logliner · 465 pts

I really like this idea. It can go so many great ways, I would be excited to rea dit, based just off this logline. Good work. I applaud you.

Former member · Singularity · 114,968 pts

The concept is problematical for me, raises more questions that dramatic possibilities, probably because once upon a time I was a theology major.? So my reaction is probably atypical. ? Still, fwiw, demons are merely fallen angels -- same species in the cosmological taxonomy.?? And if the main character was betrayed by an angel -- well, then wouldn't that treacherous angel be a demon in disguise?

How could the main character be so blind and foolish as to not realize the true nature of the "angel" who betrays her?? That seems to be the precipitating character flaw, but is it also the flaw the main character must overcome in the plot proper?

And why can't the Big Guy in the sky can't protect is own?? Or did he allow it to happen?? Is he part of a conspiracy behind a conspiracy? (Like the sorrows and suffering he allowed the Satan to inflict on Job?)

As I said, fwiw.

dogger · Singularity · 87,055 pts

The concept is problematical for me, raises more questions that dramatic possibilities, probably because once upon a time I was a theology major.? So my reaction is probably atypical. ? Still, fwiw, demons are merely fallen angels -- same species in the cosmological taxonomy.?? And if the main character was betrayed by an angel -- well, then wouldn't that treacherous angel be a demon in disguise?

How could the main character be so blind and foolish as to not realize the true nature of the "angel" who betrays her?? That seems to be the precipitating character flaw, but is it also the flaw the main character must overcome in the plot proper?

And why can't the Big Guy in the sky can't protect is own?? Or did he allow it to happen?? Is he part of a conspiracy behind a conspiracy? (Like the sorrows and suffering he allowed the Satan to inflict on Job?)

As I said, fwiw.