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I like this concept, only you have to find a way to trim it up
Your story is certainly a good one. Some snips and cuts where the others have suggested would improve your logline.
I'm thinking you might just get away with saying, "drawn into a violent conflict with an ancient civilization" and not really need the part about "fellow prisoners." (given that our protagonist is a prisoner, you've already sort of lead on that it's prisoner vs ancient civilization)
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