Pressured into attending a frat party, an introverted college student must face-off with an aggressive frat boy to save herself from becoming a rape victim.

>>Also, in order to avoid making it look like I'm trying to capitalize on national headlines, I can nix the word ?rape.?

You're needlessly handicapping yourself. ?I don't believe that there would be penalty points for capitalizing on a current event. ?It's SOP in the biz. ?It's a tried-and-true, time-honored way of promoting a script. (And you wrote the script well before the Stanford scandal, right?)

So name the threat. ?Don't leave it up to a logline reader to guess.

>>Also, in order to avoid making it look like I'm trying to capitalize on national headlines, I can nix the word ?rape.?

You're needlessly handicapping yourself. ?I don't believe that there would be penalty points for capitalizing on a current event. ?It's SOP in the biz. ?It's a tried-and-true, time-honored way of promoting a script. (And you wrote the script well before the Stanford scandal, right?)

So name the threat. ?Don't leave it up to a logline reader to guess.

Before coming to this site, this was my logline for this short:

A brainy college Sophomore, attending her first Frat party, must follow her instincts in order to save herself from a dangerous predator.

22 Words.