Seeking revenge for her sexual assault a woman crosses the line into vigilante; she is now hunted by police and the community she believes she protects.

Hello Craig,

"When seeking revenge for her sexual assault, a vigilante finds herself hunted by the police and then by the community she believes protecting"

I think the basic concept has great potential.? But ?"Hunted by the police and community" is too ?general.? ? One thing that might benefit the logline -- and story -- is to designate a specific nemesis who arises and becomes as obsessed with hunting her down as she is with being a vigilante.

I think the basic concept has great potential.? But ?"Hunted by the police and community" is too ?general.? ? One thing that might benefit the logline -- and story -- is to designate a specific nemesis who arises and becomes as obsessed with hunting her down as she is with being a vigilante.