Trapped in an all-night bank siege, a by-the-book bank teller must outwit both cops and robbers to escape with 100k from the bank’s vault to pay-off his brothers gambling debt.

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dogger · Singularity · 87,055 pts ★ Accepted

Trapped in an all-night bank siege, a bank teller seizes?the opportunity to outwit both cops and robbers and steal 100k to pay off his brother's debts.

Although it would ?make more sense to me if the stakes?were commensurate with the risk being taken.? That is,? he needs to pay off his own gambling debts.? Or those of his wife/lover/significant other.???Still, I am hooked by the general concept.? I? guess I'll just have to read the script to find out why he's taking so much risk on himself for the sake of his? (irresponsible?) brother.????So in that sense of?a logline's purpose, mission accomplished.

Former member · Singularity · 114,965 pts

The?version that spooled through my mind is that he actually pulls off the 100K heist in the confusion of the siege -- and then complications and hilarity ensue.

It's definitely a premise that can play out in several different ways.? Best of luck with whichever? one you settle on.

dogger · Singularity · 87,055 pts

The?version that spooled through my mind is that he actually pulls off the 100K heist in the confusion of the siege -- and then complications and hilarity ensue.

It's definitely a premise that can play out in several different ways.? Best of luck with whichever? one you settle on.