Upside down in a binge, pacifist Hank Thompson loses a key that belongs to the Russian mob; now Hank must find the key or die trying.

Categories:

6 reviews

dogger · Singularity · 87,055 pts ★ Accepted

A logline pitches a film or series to the movie makers, not the movie viewers.? They're the ones you're trying to invest millions of dollars and years of their precious time in your project.? Even if you withhold it from the audience for the 1st season, the producers may want to know in order to determine if the series has "legs".? Just saying.

And if everyone who knows about the key is killed, that needs to be in the logline;? that's the story hook for the 1st season:? everyone who knows about or came into possession of the key is killed.? He's next.? Which raises the dramatic question: Why?

Richiev · Singularity · 58,825 pts

If you are going to give your lead character the unusual trait of being a pacifist. You should show in the logline how the inciting puts him in a position where he must betray his beliefs... or else something bad will happen.

Former member · Singularity · 114,968 pts

A logline pitches a film or series to the movie makers, not the movie viewers.? They're the ones you're trying to invest millions of dollars and years of their precious time in your project.? Even if you withhold it from the audience for the 1st season, the producers may want to know in order to determine if the series has "legs".? Just saying.

And if everyone who knows about the key is killed, that needs to be in the logline;? that's the story hook for the 1st season:? everyone who knows about or came into possession of the key is killed.? He's next.? Which raises the dramatic question: Why?