When a lethal alien is brought on board a spaceship by accident, the crew has to fight for their survival in order to escape

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Henrik S · Penpusher · 50 pts

maybe

When a lethal alien is brought on board a spaceship, the small crew must to fight to the last man to avoid taking the monster back to earth.

ermaa · Penpusher · 85 pts

ALIEN$

I agree with the previous penpusher. The beginning could also be something in the lines of "When accidentally bringing a lethal alien onboard the spaceship..."

Former member · Singularity · 114,968 pts

Nice work, I need to rewatch this one. Maybe change out "the crew" to the main character?

Sonja · Logliner · 370 pts

In space no one can hear you in space.

Jokes aside, nice logline!
I'm thinking to tighten it, maybe you could write "when a lethal alien is found onboard a spaceship" instead?
Also, is no one the main character, do we follow the entire crew? Could someone hold the POV for the logline?