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Mentioning names in a logline is an absolute no no.
I agree with what's been said before about the logline.
And, as nicholasandrewhalls mentioned, I think the title isn't helping. For me, it makes me think of either Spike Lee's film or that 70s song.
I think Monique Mata hit the nail on the head. By just trimming this down it becomes tighter, clearer, more concise. Don't know that there's anything more needs to be said.
I'm not crazy about the title.
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