When the illegal distribution of Opioids claims the life of a high school athlete, a 3rd generation police officer leads an investigation and as the case breaks, the fallout hits close to home.
Categories: Crime
Categories: Crime
Why does it matter that he's 3rd generation?
I agree with Nir Shelter that the logline needs to cut to the chase, be more specific. His objective goal seems to be clear:? find the dealer who was selling the drug.? Well, say so.
And what is as to the central dramatic problem,obstacle or antagonist that prevents him from solving the case?? That creates dramatic tension, suspense?? "Fallout hits close to home" -- what does that mean exactly?
What's the story hook?? What makes this story stand out from all the other stories, real and fictional, about the plague of opioid addiction?
I agree with Nir Shelter that the logline needs to cut to the chase, be more specific. His objective goal seems to be clear:? find the dealer who was selling the drug.? Well, say so.
And what is as to the central dramatic problem,obstacle or antagonist that prevents him from solving the case?? That creates dramatic tension, suspense?? "Fallout hits close to home" -- what does that mean exactly?
What's the story hook?? What makes this story stand out from all the other stories, real and fictional, about the plague of opioid addiction?