When writing teacher Karels students start failing, he must kick it into overdrive in order to get his students to pass before the end of the Semester.

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Written in Stone

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Richiev · Singularity · 58,825 pts

How about this:

"After a beleaguered teacher discovers his school's deep budget cuts, he has till semester's end to reach his failing but creative students before his writing program is closed."

This way you get a sense of stakes if the teacher doesn't get his students to pass. Good luck!

ktramsay2 · Penpusher · 125 pts

Perfect. It needs a comma in the middle though. Also Karel should have a gun.

efajilan · Penpusher · 95 pts

I hope I'm an extra in this one!
I think aside from failing, there should be another main protagonist (the rebel student) to make it a bit more saucy :D