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  1. Posted: September 2, 2013In: Public

    Young William Randolph Hearst goes to war against an ageing Joseph Pulitzer as each tries to monopolize coverage of a mysterious homicide capturing New York?s imagination, birthing the modern concept of sensationalist media coverage.

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    Added an answer on September 2, 2013 at 7:38 pm

    A SMITH 5 Things your Protagonist can't survive without.....FUNCTION, WEAKNESS,INSIGHTING INCIDENT, GOAL AND STAKES.......... This idea sounds like a begining of a story, A set up to CAPTURE THE COVERAGE OF THIS NOTORIOUS KILLER..............But why is this so important now......This is however notRead more

    A SMITH 5 Things your Protagonist can’t survive without…..FUNCTION, WEAKNESS,INSIGHTING INCIDENT, GOAL AND STAKES………. This idea sounds like a begining of a story, A set up to CAPTURE THE COVERAGE OF THIS NOTORIOUS KILLER…………..But why is this so important now……This is however not a logline………….Follow the bare bones principle and hav a nice day………..Olay a la logline……A……..

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  2. Posted: September 2, 2013In: Public

    Following the outbreak of a virus that wipes out the majority of the human population, a teen documents her family?s new life in quarantine and tries to protect her infected sister.

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    Added an answer on September 2, 2013 at 7:30 pm

    A SMITH 5 Things your logline can't survive without.....FUNCTION, WEAKNESS,INSIGHTING INCIDENT, GOAL AND STAKES.......... This idea sounds like a begining of a story, A set up to break out of quarantine and save the world.......I think your protag needs to shoot higher goal wise, otherwise the sisteRead more

    A SMITH 5 Things your logline can’t survive without…..FUNCTION, WEAKNESS,INSIGHTING INCIDENT, GOAL AND STAKES………. This idea sounds like a begining of a story, A set up to break out of quarantine and save the world…….I think your protag needs to shoot higher goal wise, otherwise the sister could just write a journal…………..Remember the bare bones theory and logon…………………….

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  3. Posted: July 20, 2013In: Public

    In a post-apocalyptic future, when a reckless government agent learns that his long lost brother is a test subject in a brutal military experiment, he helps a terrorist cell fight through a dangerous wasteland to free a host of captured children.

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    Added an answer on July 20, 2013 at 4:11 am

    Yeah sounds cool whats the insighting incident , who?s the protagonist??????????Wow love it ?.have u got the synopsis,.Cover Art????You gonna make it >>>>Do it man?..ASMITH

    Yeah sounds cool whats the insighting incident , who?s the protagonist??????????Wow love it ?.have u got the synopsis,.Cover Art????You gonna make it >>>>Do it man?..ASMITH

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