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When a tafe teacher learns of a new government order he is suspicious, but when his girlfriend is kidnapped by aliens he must rescue and reverse the effects.
Thanks for the review. ok Tafe teacher ties into the relationship between the government privatising the school. No the inciting incident is when the M C meets one of the previous student film crews. Reverse the effects is not accurate he actually has to rescue his girlfriend who has been taken hostRead more
Thanks for the review.
ok Tafe teacher ties into the relationship between the government privatising the school.
No the inciting incident is when the M C meets one of the previous student film crews.
Reverse the effects is not accurate he actually has to rescue his girlfriend who has been taken hostage for the purpose of cloning humans.
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When a music teacher discovers his new girlfriend is a serial killer, he must decide whether to turn her in or continue having amazing sex.
The premise is a bit silly, with a serious lack of conscience. Choices Lets have sex and kill people isn't going to get you a lot of interest or support. It is lean but not interesting enough to warrant a cinematic movie. Maybe rethink the M C's worth and plot choices to heighten the viewers experieRead more
The premise is a bit silly, with a serious lack of conscience.
Choices Lets have sex and kill people isn’t going to get you a lot of interest or support.
It is lean but not interesting enough to warrant a cinematic movie.
Maybe rethink the M C’s worth and plot choices to heighten the viewers experience.
See lessWhen her ex-husband and the love of her life is killed by a vicious drug-manufacturing motorcycle gang, a letter-of-the-law undercover cop infiltrates the gang but must battle addiction and her moral code especially when her estranged 10 year old daughter is kidnapped by the gang.
Wow to much going on. You need clear Protagonists. Logliner Code of Structure. Avoid cliches and coincidence.
Wow to much going on. You need clear Protagonists. Logliner Code of Structure.
See lessAvoid cliches and coincidence.