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  1. Posted: October 10, 2013In: Public

    When the NSA director admits to domestic spying then solicits the aid of the best hackers, a small band of hackers decide to fight what they feel is wrong only to be entwined in an international terrorist threat and discover their initial instincts were wrong.

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    Added an answer on October 10, 2013 at 9:25 am

    LoglinesRUS - I'm confused by your logline. First of all, it's really long at 45 words. Can you clarify what the inciting incident is? Who is the main protagonist of your story? You refer to a small band of hackers but is there a leader? What is it they are fighting that is "wrong?" What are the staRead more

    LoglinesRUS – I’m confused by your logline. First of all, it’s really long at 45 words. Can you clarify what the inciting incident is? Who is the main protagonist of your story? You refer to a small band of hackers but is there a leader? What is it they are fighting that is “wrong?” What are the stakes? What will happen if the terrorist threat is not stopped?

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  2. Posted: October 8, 2013In: Public

    When the Imperial head chef is beheaded for serving uninventive dishes, the sous chef must obtain a magic cookbook in order to execute a dish pleasing to the Emperor before he and his staff are beheaded.

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    Added an answer on October 10, 2013 at 9:17 am

    A tough one to get off the ground...

    A tough one to get off the ground…

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  3. Posted: October 8, 2013In: Public

    When the Imperial head chef is beheaded for serving uninventive dishes, the sous chef must obtain a magic cookbook in order to execute a dish pleasing to the Emperor before he and his staff are beheaded.

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    Added an answer on October 10, 2013 at 9:07 am

    Hi dpg, I was trying to be a bit kooky with this one. The rating would be above the PG13 crowd for sure and the main target market is China. I was going for something eccentric/vulgar/violent along the lines of a Stephen Chow movie like the God of Cookery in which magic, martial arts and a lot of coRead more

    Hi dpg, I was trying to be a bit kooky with this one. The rating would be above the PG13 crowd for sure and the main target market is China. I was going for something eccentric/vulgar/violent along the lines of a Stephen Chow movie like the God of Cookery in which magic, martial arts and a lot of cooking was featured – definitely not for a young crowd. The genre would be a (weird) combination – historical epic mixed with myth mixed with violent black comedy.

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