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When a college athlete discovers that the university’s Greek Life is a front for demonic mafias who have been corrupting students with a supernatural drug, he launches a crusade against Hell, risking his enrollment, and his life, in the process.
I like the devil's pact angle, & the gateway joke. apart from the logline, the rest of the outline looks like this: A university student named Alex, struggling with peer pressure (since he doesn't knows yet - about the secret societies) and a sense of purposelessness --> rumors of a powerfulRead more
I like the devil’s pact angle, & the gateway joke.
apart from the logline, the rest of the outline looks like this:
A university student named Alex, struggling with peer pressure (since he doesn’t knows yet – about the secret societies) and a sense of purposelessness –> rumors of a powerful hallucinogen known as “Shadow’s Breath” circulate among students –> Curiosity and desperation lead Alex to consume Shadow’s Breath, seeking direction and power –> Alex experiences intense hallucinations and encounters ancient demonic entities –> In his altered state, Alex unwittingly enters into pacts with these demons, binding himself to their will –> Awakening to reality, Alex realizes the consequences of his actions and the perilous path ahead –> Alex discovers the existence of secret societies within the university, each with its own agenda regarding the supernatural –> The demons of his house reveal their true intentions to Alex –> Alex becomes embroiled in a treacherous conflict between these secret societies and the demonic forces –> Alex grapples with the addictive allure of Shadow’s Breath, facing withdrawal and temptation –> He must navigate the demands of the demons bound to him, each requiring dark favors in exchange for power –> Alex struggles to maintain his humanity amidst the corrupting influence of the demons and the drug –> As Alex delves deeper into the supernatural underworld, he uncovers the Devil’s intricate scheme to manipulate humanity, via this school –> With the clock ticking, Alex races to thwart the Devil’s plans and prevent the apocalypse –> Along the way, he forms unlikely alliances with fellow students and members of rival secret societies –> Despite the chaos unfolding around him, Alex must juggle his academic responsibilities to avoid expulsion from the university –> The pressure of maintaining his grades adds another layer of tension to his already overwhelming situation –> Alex’s academic pursuits provide him with crucial insights and resources to combat the supernatural threats –> The conflict between secret societies and demonic forces reaches its zenith as the Devil’s machinations near fruition –> Alex & the gang confronts the Devil in a climactic showdown, drawing upon their newfound strength – unity –> Through Self control and sheer determination, Alex manages to thwart the Devil’s master plan, averting the apocalypse and restoring balance –> With the crisis averted, Alex reflects on his journey and the lessons learned about power, responsibility, and the nature of evil –> He chooses to sever his ties with the demonic entities, embracing his humanity and seeking redemption –> Despite the scars left by his ordeal, Alex emerges stronger and wiser, ready to face whatever challenges the future may hold, while also getting the girl in the end 😛
Reads like Hogwarts, but since I’ve written it poorly maybe there’s some hope when you try it your way. I can see interesting parts here and there…
fwiw
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I love the outline. I like the section where he realizes he has become part of the problem; this will help explore the theme. What he does for a living, might have this movie inadvertently be compared to the taxi driver (1976). Maybe finding a different way of executing the second act will help, what do you think?
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