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After pledging his eyes posthumous, a highschool nerd must evade fatal attacks from a blind cameraman (on a hunt for matching doner)
Suggested format:When a [protagonist] is attacked by a blind cameraman, she must cancel her eye donation pledge (or risk her life to a madman hunting for a match)How elastic is this Conflict, Can it sustain a feature length plot? How will the cameraman know that she cancelled her donation and thus sRead more
Suggested format:
When a [protagonist] is attacked by a blind cameraman, she must cancel her eye donation pledge (or risk her life to a madman hunting for a match)
How elastic is this Conflict, Can it sustain a feature length plot? How will the cameraman know that she cancelled her donation and thus stop attacking her? Why doesn’t she reach out to the Police?
See lessA former public speaker with super senses and aggression behaviors and a lab scientist must stop a rich influential businessman from destroy the city with a serum provokes violence and aggression.
Why must he?Why him?(Is it because his awful aggression is taking away from the 'public speaking'? As a result, his goal should be to restore himself rather than preventing a corrupt magnate from misusing the serum. Since there isn't any inciting incident, can't say what his action needs beThis coulRead more
Why must he?
Why him?
(Is it because his awful aggression is taking away from the ‘public speaking’? As a result, his goal should be to restore himself rather than preventing a corrupt magnate from misusing the serum. Since there isn’t any inciting incident, can’t say what his action needs be
This could set late, and go in any wild direction: “After a corrupt industrialist floods the city with Rage Serum, a berserk public speaker must help its creator in retrieving the-antidote-he-plans-to-sell-for-millions”)
See lessSingle father and cat burglar Greg Valdez steals an ancient artifact and must outwit a 700-year-old madman to save the life of his son.
Usage of the word "ancient artifact" with "700-year-old madman" makes me want to guess "stealing the artifact" will lead to "the son needs saving". As Richiev pointed out, it requires guesswork. My issue is: Since he stole it, why is the madman targeting his son?It also needs clarity with what's stoRead more
Usage of the word “ancient artifact” with “700-year-old madman” makes me want to guess “stealing the artifact” will lead to “the son needs saving”. As Richiev pointed out, it requires guesswork. My issue is: Since he stole it, why is the madman targeting his son?
It also needs clarity with what’s stopping the father from killing this-very old-madman?, for us to map the urgency of his situation; to better imagine his Goal.
PS. Drop “Greg Valdez”, unless it’s historically relevant, or an IP.
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