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When as actress playing a costumed hero crosses the line, as would her character, her actions alter the lives of everyone around her.
'..who acted as her character would' is not required. You are giving more space to the Actress.Who's your protagonist? (Fighting for a rape victim seems more heroic than falling for a club owner.. )Since Amber is still the protagonist (drop the name..) bring her Goal in the Logline. Suggested formatRead more
‘..who acted as her character would’ is not required. You are giving more space to the Actress.
Who’s your protagonist? (Fighting for a rape victim seems more heroic than falling for a club owner.. )
Since Amber is still the protagonist (drop the name..) bring her Goal in the Logline. Suggested format-
“After falling for the guy who’s pressing charges against her sister for vandalizing his club, [a PROTAGONIST] must [reach this objective GOAL]”?
>>the main goal for this story is her sister meeting the club owner
…which is potential conflict to her goal of associating with this club owner, although-as a protagonist-this would change after her sister reveals her end of the plot (about the rape). That’s good plot. To be clear, I meant GOAL of the protagonist.
PS. share your script over mail if you must
See lessWhen as actress playing a costumed hero crosses the line, as would her character, her actions alter the lives of everyone around her.
Hello clarkratliff.? New to logline.it? ?start here! ?Currently it's vague how she crosses the line, and how her actions alter the lives of those around her. It helps if you go for a specific event. Focus on what becomes her objective goal as a result of the inciting incident. Hope this helps :D
Hello clarkratliff.? New to logline.it? ?start here! ?Currently it’s vague how she crosses the line, and how her actions alter the lives of those around her. It helps if you go for a specific event. Focus on what becomes her objective goal as a result of the inciting incident. Hope this helps 😀
See lessMs. RAMBO and her female ET drinking buddy rescue PASSENGERS from starving evil ETs and then meets THE DAY THE EARTH STOOD STILL (of 1951).
Hello Steve. Kindly avoid cross-film references. After reading your synopsis, this is one possible format:"When nations start testing their weapons, a friendly ET disguised among humans must prevent World War III with his drinking buddies or loose their only compatible planet"I took the humans fightRead more
Hello Steve. Kindly avoid cross-film references. After reading your synopsis, this is one possible format:
“When nations start testing their weapons, a friendly ET disguised among humans must prevent World War III with his drinking buddies or loose their only compatible planet”
I took the humans fighting each other as the inciting incident since that’s what propels your protagonist into action. Everything prior to that is Setup. I took the liberty with a singular protagonist, which your previous version didn’t have.
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