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A junior level cyber crimes analyst searches for the truth behind a college student?s death and a smartphone App that supposedly takes the life of whoever agrees to its terms of service. Now she must find the tech savy killer before he strikes his next victim, her family.
An Inciting incident (investigating the student's death) should be a direct cause to one's Goal (finding the killer before he strikes her family). & Why does the killer targets her family? An App that kills is hooking, so maybe bring that forward:"After her parents sign up on an App that killedRead more
An Inciting incident (investigating the student’s death) should be a direct cause to one’s Goal (finding the killer before he strikes her family). & Why does the killer targets her family? An App that kills is hooking, so maybe bring that forward:
“After her parents sign up on an App that killed her classmate, a highschooler must stop the cyber killer before he wipes her family”
sloppy, but you get the idea..
See lessTv Series: After an explosion opens a hole in Hell, allowing demons and unknown creatures to escape, the son of the devil travels to Los Angeles to bring them back before they overrun the world.
mikepedley85 means that his goal -unless stated- would be to let the demons overrun the world "..his reasons are his own.." needs to be spelled out,for instance-When demons escape hell, the son of devil must bring them back to prove himself a better guardian over his elder brotherAlthough I have a lRead more
mikepedley85 means that his goal -unless stated- would be to let the demons overrun the world “..his reasons are his own..” needs to be spelled out,
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When demons escape hell, the son of devil must bring them back to prove himself a better guardian over his elder brother
Although I have a love-hate relationship with the TVS format, I am interested in its differences from loglining for a feature film. So it must have enough juice to last a dozen hours & can be structured into Three Act for every episode. But when it comes to the whole, Is it the Second Act which must be elastic enough to bring most of the plot?
If so, the action of “..must bring the demons back..” is the second act. It paints a very specific premise which dictates the nature of your TVS. It becomes a narrative of catching demons. This is how your trailer would look like. This action will determine the kind of audience it attracts.
When a king finds a strong fierce woman to be his queen, he must fight to protect from his adversary, a royal woodsman, who wants to dethrone him and keep him from having an heir.
Since the event (finding her) isn't the source of his goal (to fight the woodsman), you are missing out on the inciting incident.
Since the event (finding her) isn’t the source of his goal (to fight the woodsman), you are missing out on the inciting incident.
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