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Adar, an alien assassin, transports to Earth seeking three killers with chameleon abilities who escaped his ship. Adar must find his prey quickly before many of Earth?s inhabitants are slaughtered or live with dishonor.
Why should he worry about humans?
Why should he worry about humans?
See lessJulia a high school girl, learns that her younger sister has a bowel syndrome disorder and should undergo surgery as soon as possible. She decides to go to Texas with her two friends. But in their road trip, they get involved in some adventures.
Since the Inciting Event is how she learns about her sister's condition, I'm assuming her Goal (which i shouldn't have to) is 'to help with her surgery' in some way... Instead she decides to go to Texas with her two friends. How does it relates to her Goal? That their road trip is adventurous needsRead more
Since the Inciting Event is how she learns about her sister’s condition, I’m assuming her Goal (which i shouldn’t have to) is ‘to help with her surgery’ in some way… Instead she decides to go to Texas with her two friends.
See lessHow does it relates to her Goal?
That their road trip is adventurous needs not be mentioned
Good Luck!!
When his unknown opponent suffers a brain haemorrhage in the ring at a local tournament, a rookie fighter must discover the boxer’s identity and find his family to gift his prize money to them.
"How hard could it be?" needs be cleared up in your logline. The 'implied conflict' must be reflected... This injury which happened in 'the ring', was then primered over TV right? How hard would it be to track them if they - after becoming aware of his injury - would try to reach him too?If not, itRead more
“How hard could it be?” needs be cleared up in your logline. The ‘implied conflict’ must be reflected… This injury which happened in ‘the ring’, was then primered over TV right? How hard would it be to track them if they – after becoming aware of his injury – would try to reach him too?
See lessIf not, it needs to be cleared in the logline
Apart from that, it would be a heart touching film
Good Luck!