1. Posted: June 23, 2018In:

    A young boy in high school and his goofy uncle, a washed-up actor, try and become the next big stand-up comedy duo.

    variable Uberwriter

    It's a pretty cool premise. What must the young boy in high school and his goofy uncle overcome to become the next big stand-up comedy duo? Or out of what sympathetic necessity? Good Luck!!

    It’s a pretty cool premise. What must the young boy in high school and his goofy uncle overcome to become the next big stand-up comedy duo? Or out of what sympathetic necessity?
    Good Luck!!

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  2. Posted: June 23, 2018In:

    A young boy attempts to rise the ranks as a grandmaster chess player, but his goals are thrown off when his mentor intervenes out of jealousy.

    variable Uberwriter

    Turning it upside down to shout logline format -- When a young chess player faces professional jealousy, he must ___(GOAL/ACTION)___ to rise as a grandmaster Edit for a more Cinematic working. Envy is relatable but common. Good Luck!!

    Turning it upside down to shout logline format —
    When a young chess player faces professional jealousy, he must ___(GOAL/ACTION)___ to rise as a grandmaster

    Edit for a more Cinematic working. Envy is relatable but common. Good Luck!!

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  3. Posted: June 23, 2018In:

    When a group of girls are expelled from their high school for an explicit group chat they created, they make it their goal to get back at the snitch who got them caught.

    variable Uberwriter

    It's not a very "cinematic goal"

    It’s not a very “cinematic goal”

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