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When the ultimate betrayal comes to surface, 8 friends will become enemies and only 1 will be left standing.
Some questions pop to mind - 1. Who betrays whom? 2. Who's your protagonist? 3. What was the nature of betrayal? & 4. ..As a result of which, what becomes the protagonist's GOAL PS. If you are aiming to write for multiple protagonist's, the link below might be helpful: https://loglines.org/logliRead more
Some questions pop to mind –
1. Who betrays whom?
2. Who’s your protagonist?
3. What was the nature of betrayal? &
4. ..As a result of which, what becomes the protagonist’s GOAL
PS. If you are aiming to write for multiple protagonist’s, the link below might be helpful:
https://loglines.org/logline/how-to-write-a-story-with-multiple-protagonists/
Good Luck!!
See lessAfter finding photographs of them taken while they slept, a honeymooning couple must uncover the truth behind the photographer’s identity hidden in the portraits of previous guests of the holiday home before they become just another picture on the wall.
Apart from [ establishing how they know....that if they don't hunt down the photographer, they'll die ], It's an idea worth working on :) Another take, to EDIT tidbits from -- "After discovering their photographs (on a wall of deceased/in the obituary??), a newlywed must unearth the responsible cameRead more
Apart from [ establishing how they know….that if they don’t hunt down the photographer, they’ll die ], It’s an idea worth working on 🙂
Another take, to EDIT tidbits from —
“After discovering their photographs (on a wall of deceased/in the obituary??), a newlywed must unearth the responsible cameraman (or join his victims)”
Good Luck mikepedley85!!
See lessAfter the high school bullies reduce the sweet librarian to tears, a popular kid with a bright future risks expulsion to lead an alliance of seven uniquely skilled students to make sure the bullies get kicked out first.
Guillerson covered similar premise with -- https://loglines.org/logline/when-an-idealistic-boy-tired-of-bullying-establishes-a-secret-club-of-victims-to-impart-justice-some-members-of-the-group-begin-to-turn-into-very-dangerous-bullies/ Which made me think....What's the cool kid got to lose? Your veRead more
Guillerson covered similar premise with —
https://loglines.org/logline/when-an-idealistic-boy-tired-of-bullying-establishes-a-secret-club-of-victims-to-impart-justice-some-members-of-the-group-begin-to-turn-into-very-dangerous-bullies/
Which made me think….What’s the cool kid got to lose? Your version could benefit from clearly establishing stakes
See lessGood Luck mikepedley85!!