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After her husband is slaughtered by a shadowy creature whilst trying to save their screaming children in the other tent, a resourceful mother has to find a way to protect them.
"...without getting herself killed" can be dropped. These are high stakes. This creature, capable of manslaughter seems impossible to evade. Maybe declaring him "deaf" in the logline could work to your benefit, or your logline-pitch could suffer from it's impossibility. What are your thoughts? WhileRead more
“…without getting herself killed” can be dropped.
See lessThese are high stakes. This creature, capable of manslaughter seems impossible to evade. Maybe declaring him “deaf” in the logline could work to your benefit, or your logline-pitch could suffer from it’s impossibility. What are your thoughts?
While the film largely relies on sound, kindly make sure that it does not lose the quality which qualifies it as a “moving picture”
I am hooked. Good Luck!!
A neglected eight-year-old girl comes up with a dangerous idea to try and communicate with her recently deceased mother on Halloween.
'Dangerous' doesn't sum up the complications that arise after she tries to talk to her dead mother. It's a great premise which could greatly benefit from the rules section -- https://loglines.org/howto/ Good Luck SteveDoss!!
‘Dangerous’ doesn’t sum up the complications that arise after she tries to talk to her dead mother.
See lessIt’s a great premise which could greatly benefit from the rules section — https://loglines.org/howto/
Good Luck SteveDoss!!
Malevolent Rattlesnake. Trickster Coyote. Romantic Jackrabbit. To rescue her kidnapped daughter, she must face them all in a dangerous and perplexing supernatural world.
Hello MarinaM! Currently it reads like a tag line... Visit https://loglines.org/howto :) & Repost your second version with the simple format in the rules section. Good Luck!!
Hello MarinaM!
See lessCurrently it reads like a tag line…
Visit https://loglines.org/howto 🙂
& Repost your second version with the simple format in the rules section. Good Luck!!