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After finally meeting the woman of his dreams, a bumbling 54 year old must choose between this new romance or the tyrannical lady tied up in his basement he pretends is his wife.
It's a great idea to play with. The only trouble is - how to create empathy for such a protagonist? How will you make us root for such heroism, it's been attempted before so might wanna research other Antiheroes such as LOU BLOOM from "NIGHTCRAWLER", PATRICK BATEMAN from "AMERICAN PSYCHO", SONNY WORRead more
It’s a great idea to play with. The only trouble is – how to create empathy for such a protagonist?
How will you make us root for such heroism, it’s been attempted before so might wanna research other Antiheroes such as LOU BLOOM from “NIGHTCRAWLER”, PATRICK BATEMAN from “AMERICAN PSYCHO”, SONNY WORTZIK from “DOG DAY AFTERNOON”, DANIEL PLAINVIEW from “THERE WILL BE BLOOD”, ALEX DELARGE from “A CLOCKWORK ORANGE” and TRAVIS BICKLE from “TAXI DRIVER”
Good Luck mikepedley85!!
See lessTo save the Tree of Life from the ever encroaching shadow, a girl must learn to once again trust in humanity. The very people that wiped out her entire kingdom.
"When the shadow engulfs a neighbouring farm, the forest nymph must save the tree of life, overcoming her distrust in humans" . . But why should she? A similar premise took place in Miyazaki's "Princess Mononoke (1997)". What makes your plot unique? Also, the stakes aren't clear. What if the Tree faRead more
“When the shadow engulfs a neighbouring farm, the forest nymph must save the tree of life, overcoming her distrust in humans”
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But why should she?
A similar premise took place in Miyazaki’s “Princess Mononoke (1997)”. What makes your plot unique?
Also, the stakes aren’t clear.
What if the Tree falls?
aka., what’s her dramatic need? As a result of which, what becomes her objective-visual-goal?
Good Luck!!
See lessIn a world of dream addicts, a washed up detective stumbles across a murder within a dream and must delve further into addiction to solve it.
Agreed with dpg Also, It's just a dream. I'm missing the stakes here. Your logline needs to spell out what it means for someone to get killed in a dream. Dream addiction sounds cool though :) Good Luck!!
Agreed with dpg
Also, It’s just a dream. I’m missing the stakes here. Your logline needs to spell out what it means for someone to get killed in a dream.
Dream addiction sounds cool though 🙂
See lessGood Luck!!