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  1. Posted: June 13, 2018In: Thriller

    When a family skiing trip ends in the murder of her parents, a sheltered teenager must lead her friends through a blizzard to escape a gang of vengeful hunters.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on June 13, 2018 at 1:58 pm

    Agree with Craig, also this is one of those instances (mentioned by Richiev) as having a bigger inciting incident than the plot that proceeds it. Is it possible to not kill the parents in the Inciting incident? That kind of triggers the 'defeatist' in an audience and they get to think: "it cannot geRead more

    Agree with Craig,

    also this is one of those instances (mentioned by Richiev) as having a bigger inciting incident than the plot that proceeds it. Is it possible to not kill the parents in the Inciting incident?
    That kind of triggers the ‘defeatist’ in an audience and they get to think: “it cannot get any worse…” To make it ‘page turning’ becomes harder

    Good Luck The_CNI!

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  2. Posted: June 12, 2018In: Comedy

    When a ruthless, undercover alien headhunter discovers, her goofy co-travel-guide-researcher is from the rivaling faction, they must secretly use their genuine budding friendship to outwit the mastermind set on pinning them against each other. (The Alien Guide To Bavaria – to be a youtube show)

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on June 13, 2018 at 2:56 am

    How "comedy"?

    How “comedy”?

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  3. Posted: June 11, 2018In: Anniversary

    “To rescue his parents and save humanity, Renaissance artist Leonardo Da Vinci must destroy an intergalactic megalomaniac’s alien armada with his unproven inventions.”

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on June 11, 2018 at 8:59 pm

    Inspired by both versions (in 25 W...) "When an alien overlord invades Italy in late 1400, young (Da) Vinci must defeat an intergalactic dictator with his unproven inventions to free his parents" Good Luck dho1115!!

    Inspired by both versions (in 25 W…)

    “When an alien overlord invades Italy in late 1400, young (Da) Vinci must defeat an intergalactic dictator with his unproven inventions to free his parents”

    Good Luck dho1115!!

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