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When zombies slaughter their classmates and the teacher drives off with the bus, the high school film club, stranded in the wilderness, must use all their skills and movie knowledge to stay alive until help arrives.
This different format trims it by 11 words (still a long shot) "Arriving late at the campsite, when the movie club finds the rest of their campmates devoured by zombies, film knowledge becomes their only chance at evading the undead" Make that "their mentor's film knowledge becomes their only chanceRead more
This different format trims it by 11 words (still a long shot)
“Arriving late at the campsite, when the movie club finds the rest of their campmates devoured by zombies, film knowledge becomes their only chance at evading the undead”
Make that “their mentor’s film knowledge becomes their only chance….” for a single protagonist
PS. They are late because their bus got a flat tire, without which they cannot leave when they finally reach
Good Luck mikepedley85!!
See lessWhen zombies slaughter their classmates and the teacher drives off with the bus, the high school film club, stranded in the wilderness, must use all their skills and movie knowledge to stay alive until help arrives.
Why don't they outrun the zombies? Or, What's keeping them locked inside? Think "monster in the house" paradigm of blake snyder. Can a "camping trip" serve as the "house" element that traps them in? Other than that...???????? perfect. I'm hooked to see how they use their movie knowledge for survivalRead more
Why don’t they outrun the zombies?
Or, What’s keeping them locked inside?
Think “monster in the house” paradigm of blake snyder. Can a “camping trip” serve as the “house” element that traps them in?
Other than that…???????? perfect. I’m hooked to see how they use their movie knowledge for survival. So much scope!
Good Luck with your writing mikepedley85!!
See lessAfter the death of his wife, a control freak juggles raising his 2 year old son, managing his successful business, and protecting his friendship with his best friend who moves in to help.
The only thing I'm sceptic about is his Objective Goal Which particular achievement (event per say..) will establish his victory. Internally--to grow up into a better parent and stop being a control freak, I get that--but what becomes his objective-visual-goal after his wife's death. It promises a gRead more
The only thing I’m sceptic about is his Objective Goal
Which particular achievement (event per say..) will establish his victory. Internally–to grow up into a better parent and stop being a control freak, I get that–but what becomes his objective-visual-goal after his wife’s death. It promises a great character arc, only….which ‘wrinkle’ makes it different from Kramer Vs Kramer 1979 (and you bet your a** it will be compared)
Good Luck mikepedley85!!
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