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After a crisis of faith forces him to leave his 17-year career, a restless pastor must create a new tribe for himself and the other spiritually homeless.
What happens if he doesn't? (relate to "who is he proving himself to and why")
What happens if he doesn’t?
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Upon successful human cloning, the mother and the Military of USA destroy the Earth, to redefine ?Mankind? and ?Humanity? on a recreated Earth.
After reading the plot, I'd say it has multiple unrelated elements which seem deliberately created rather than natural. The plot lacks a singular throughline. That's because her goal is vague. What must she do to ensure the safety of her kids? How does her being "biologically enhanced" works in theRead more
After reading the plot, I’d say it has multiple unrelated elements which seem deliberately created rather than natural. The plot lacks a singular throughline. That’s because her goal is vague. What must she do to ensure the safety of her kids?
How does her being “biologically enhanced” works in the scheme of your plot (so much that it needs mentioning in the logline)
See less“Social acceptance” of her cloned children needs to be more specific.
Why is her own brother gonna take them away?
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A logline must raise this one question only:
“will the protagonist achieve his goal?”
After they make a wish to kill their parents, a group of teenagers discover they?ve messed with an entity that makes this wish come true.
If the entity "makes this wish come true", their parents are dead. What can they do now but hold their funerals. So "makes" does not work (...could also benefit from something that can stretch your plot; "death" is pretty terminal) Also you MUST have a singular protagonist. focus on what becomes hisRead more
If the entity “makes this wish come true”, their parents are dead. What can they do now but hold their funerals. So “makes” does not work (…could also benefit from something that can stretch your plot; “death” is pretty terminal)
Also you MUST have a singular protagonist.
focus on what becomes his/her objective goal after discovering an entity capable of fulfilling his naive wish…
good luck The_CNI
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