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When a young climber becomes paraplegic after an accident. In the rehabilitation center, she must accept her reality and find a new motivation for her life before choosing suicide.
It's kinda vague but interesting. Would greatly improve with a goal more specific than "finding new motivation" It gives us no hint as to what's happening in the action "accept her reality". What becomes her objective-visual-goal? also maybe drop "..before choosing suicide" and edit with the adjectiRead more
It’s kinda vague but interesting. Would greatly improve with a goal more specific than “finding new motivation”
It gives us no hint as to what’s happening in the action “accept her reality”.
What becomes her objective-visual-goal?
also maybe drop “..before choosing suicide” and edit with the adjective “dejected” since loglines are more about the first two acts; or change the format to — “after becoming paraplegic in an accident, a young cragsman must…” [add objective goal]
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After murdering an immigrant, he convinces his psychiatrist to declare him insane so as not to be put on trial, but a detective will follow his steps to lock him up.
Maybe somewhere along -- "When his wife's therapist pleads insane after killing her, a grieving detective must prove it otherwise and bring justice" (to make things personal for him...)
Maybe somewhere along — “When his wife’s therapist pleads insane after killing her, a grieving detective must prove it otherwise and bring justice” (to make things personal for him…)
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>>>if I fix the tech issues it will get made... But it isn't yet & while we are trying to point out the "tech issues" you really are posting the same version again. Do you think your film will solve itself? Currently it does not read as a film idea, however original your writing might bRead more
>>>if I fix the tech issues it will get made…
But it isn’t yet
& while we are trying to point out the “tech issues” you really are posting the same version again.
Do you think your film will solve itself?
Currently it does not read as a film idea, however original your writing might be. There’s got to be a reason why – despite of being inspiring – it isn’t sold yet. Try to wrap your head around that…
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