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  1. Posted: May 23, 2018In: Public

    A tragic traffic accident changes the course of 3 characters who passionately pursue morally unacceptable loves. – Amores Perros (Love’s a bitch)

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    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 23, 2018 at 10:42 pm

    Loglining a plot with multiple protagonist requires specification of a unifying theme which becomes: "passionate pursuit of morally unacceptable love" Which sounds great to me! And the title is refreshing Can you clarify more on what becomes their objective goal as a result of this tragic accident "Read more

    Loglining a plot with multiple protagonist requires specification of a unifying theme which becomes: “passionate pursuit of morally unacceptable love” Which sounds great to me! And the title is refreshing

    Can you clarify more on what becomes their objective goal as a result of this tragic accident

    “..changes the course of..” can be dropped

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    When a traffic accident makes “three characters” realize that their passionate pursuit of love is morally unacceptable, they must [achieve this goal]

    good luck!

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  2. Posted: May 20, 2018In: Fantasy

    When a disillusioned married woman is absorbed by a surrealist painting, she struggles to develop the power to free herself from the painting before becoming part of it, while falling in love with a man of painting.

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    Added an answer on May 20, 2018 at 8:59 pm

    While story of a disillusioned married woman falling in love with a man of painting seems poetic, what must she do as "she struggles to develop the power to free herself from the painting" seems unclear. What becomes her objective goal?

    While story of a disillusioned married woman falling in love with a man of painting seems poetic, what must she do as “she struggles to develop the power to free herself from the painting” seems unclear. What becomes her objective goal?

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  3. Posted: May 19, 2018In: Fantasy

    When a disillusioned married woman is absorbed by a surrealist painting, she struggles to develop the power to free herself from the painting before becoming part of it, while falling in love with a man of painting.

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    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 19, 2018 at 2:41 pm

    It's a really interesting thought by Richiev -- inciting incident being bigger than the goal Ok. This is a logline with superb potential. Maybe introduce a ticking clock; people trapped in his paintings get frozen after a day. It would be cool if the painter practiced the dark "arts" and trapped peoRead more

    It’s a really interesting thought by Richiev — inciting incident being bigger than the goal

    Ok. This is a logline with superb potential. Maybe introduce a ticking clock; people trapped in his paintings get frozen after a day. It would be cool if the painter practiced the dark “arts” and trapped people in his paintings…maybe that’s why his paintings are so surreal and realistic!! – “When his wife goes missing in a surrealistic exhibition…”
    good luck

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