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After a sinister cult conjures evil spirits in their new home, a young family must survive the demonic presence and the cult that?s hell-bent on sacrificing them to ancient deities on Halloween night.
Make 'an atheist family' sign up a blood contract with a conceited Halloween cult---in an attempt to annoy them by stealing their magic lamp (which was meant to be buried by the sunrise)---accidentally releasing evil spirits in their pool party, and now MUST contact the cult HQ for a possible solutiRead more
Make ‘an atheist family’ sign up a blood contract with a conceited Halloween cult—in an attempt to annoy them by stealing their magic lamp (which was meant to be buried by the sunrise)—accidentally releasing evil spirits in their pool party, and now MUST contact the cult HQ for a possible solution….
See lessA schizophrenic young woman lives in constant suspicion of her life being surveilled and manipulated. A seemingly endless witch hunt for the truth takes place as she can’t seem to trust anyone.
"..as she can't seem to trust anyone" seems repetitive after her "living in constant suspicion".........which tells us about her circumstances. It doesn't clears up the INCITING INCIDENT Also, what is the nature of this "seemingly endless witch hunt for the truth". Isn't that what most thrillers areRead more
“..as she can’t seem to trust anyone” seems repetitive after her “living in constant suspicion”………which tells us about her circumstances. It doesn’t clears up the INCITING INCIDENT
Also, what is the nature of this “seemingly endless witch hunt for the truth”. Isn’t that what most thrillers are about? A layer of misdirection as a tool to direct attention.
Finally as a result of your Inciting incident, what becomes her objective GOAL?
The premise is an interesting one but lacks specificity
Good Luck
See lessA teen mysteriously cured of terminal cancer becomes the centerpiece of a war between supernatural factions that are hellbent on procuring a miraculous, prophetic pregnancy that grows inside of her.
True about Protagonist's Goal. Now you might say next that it's implied: "safety of her child and herself" but it's cool if the logline spells it out. That helps us visualize the nature of her journey and work on making it more hooking. That IMO must remain a logliner's goal. Also maybe Jason meantRead more
True about Protagonist’s Goal.
Now you might say next that it’s implied: “safety of her child and herself” but it’s cool if the logline spells it out. That helps us visualize the nature of her journey and work on making it more hooking. That IMO must remain a logliner’s goal.
Also maybe Jason meant that her pregnancy isn’t a surprise. ..then the Inciting Event remains “getting miraculously cured of cancer” to attract global attention.
Goodluck!
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