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re-edit After his wife is murdered a brilliant scientist travels back in time again and again to try and save her, slowly mutating into a hideous monster. He uncovers his wife?s secret life and in his anger kills her. Grief stricken he returns one more time to change the past
Take 2 The time traveller investigating his wife's absence encounters a familiar face with intricate details of their personal life and must chase him in other timelines to unravel the mystery (29 Words)
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The time traveller investigating his wife’s absence encounters a familiar face with intricate details of their personal life and must chase him in other timelines to unravel the mystery
(29 Words)
See lessre-edit After his wife is murdered a brilliant scientist travels back in time again and again to try and save her, slowly mutating into a hideous monster. He uncovers his wife?s secret life and in his anger kills her. Grief stricken he returns one more time to change the past
"A time traveller investigating his wife's absence encounters a monster with a familiar face, who knows too much about their private life" That he's the monster; That he uncovers his wife's secret life (and that's why he killed her); That grief stricken he returns once more to change the past; Is deRead more
“A time traveller investigating his wife’s absence encounters a monster with a familiar face, who knows too much about their private life”
That he’s the monster;
That he uncovers his wife’s secret life
(and that’s why he killed her);
That grief stricken he returns once more to change the past;
Is detail for film, not the logline
PS. I think it’s a good film
See lessDoes my logline work, is it clear and show the character, event, and action.
I would like to see a ghetto girl outsmart city brats (and maybe fall for one of them) it's an interesting premise... Character: A young black Caribbean girl from the ghetto Event: leaves her unfit mother, a protective grandmother and drug lord godfather to live with her so-called dad in suburbia AmRead more
I would like to see a ghetto girl outsmart city brats (and maybe fall for one of them) it’s an interesting premise…
Character: A young black Caribbean girl from the ghetto
Event: leaves her unfit mother, a protective grandmother and drug lord godfather to live with her so-called dad in suburbia America
Goal: ?? (heart of a logline)
Action: where she uses her street sense to overcome prejudice and ignorant stereotypes
Conflict:?? (not necessary to mention, but must be implied)
It’s not enough to show character, event and goal (not action) They must tightly relate to each other.
You are not mentioning “three seperate things” but “one logline”
The way I see it, drop a goal for her…then create necessary conflict. Reverse Engineer your way to the event to satisfy “why this character” and “why now”
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