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A Jamaican virus infects a small town and only a bunch of stoners can save their family and friends from becoming zombies by rounding them up and getting them high.
When small town stoners realize they are immune to the spreading virus, [protagonist] must lead a group of potheads to [goal]
When small town stoners realize they are immune to the spreading virus, [protagonist] must lead a group of potheads to [goal]
See lessWhen a young pregnant woman finds herself unconscious in an unknown apartment, she must escape saving her unborn child from a psychopath who eats young life.
"After waking up in a vacant mall, a pregnant teenager must escape from a cannibalistic psychopath before her water breaks" It's a lousy try, you will have to edit detail for your perusal
“After waking up in a vacant mall, a pregnant teenager must escape from a cannibalistic psychopath before her water breaks”
It’s a lousy try, you will have to edit detail for your perusal
See lessTag: ?It is said that a mind is a terrible thing to waste? For some, it is also a very terrifying thing to lose?? Logline: Wrongfully incarcerated, an innocent gay male must rely on his feminine nature to survive as he struggles to maintain his sanity against the uncertainty of unpredictable cellmates and the jailhouse mentality that threatens to break him.
What's his goal. I'm guessing it isn't escaping the prison. Since It isn't the usual, my review will have to match your frequency to achieve some good here. It's more about the journey of an innocent prisoner. My query is: 1. When (in plot length) does the audience learn of his wrongful incarceratioRead more
What’s his goal. I’m guessing it isn’t escaping the prison.
Since It isn’t the usual, my review will have to match your frequency to achieve some good here.
It’s more about the journey of an innocent prisoner.
My query is:
1. When (in plot length) does the audience learn of his wrongful incarceration?
2. When does he learn (did he always knew but couldn’t prove)?
2. Why do you insist on him being “an innocent gay” as opposed to a regular guy.
3. Do you think “relying on his feminine nature” is enough for him to survive his unpredictable cellmates? And how?
4. Does he have a friend inside?
5. Who dies in your film?
6. Do you show his getting out of the prison (and his reaction to it?) Or is it a life sentence?
7. What is his subjective goal (dramatic need opposed to the objective goal)?
Kindly comment these answers
See lessAfter I have sufficient plot to work on, I will try my best to identify and tweak the nature of your logline, since right now it is un-cinematic.