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In 2148, After the attack of a strange virus to human genetics, a blind man, and a handicapped woman teams up to lead an army against immunes to bring justice.
I think it could benefit from singular protagonist and a clear goal- "After a genetic war leaves the less privileged with irreversible physical damage, a blind boxer leads other victims to obtain the vaccine supply for newborns, hoarded by the immuned rich" Beware!! it's an overused premise
I think it could benefit from singular protagonist and a clear goal-
“After a genetic war leaves the less privileged with irreversible physical damage, a blind boxer leads other victims to obtain the vaccine supply for newborns, hoarded by the immuned rich”
Beware!! it’s an overused premise
See lessAfter an accident a young boy begins to hear his cat talking to him – telling him to kill.
Agreed with dpg Also he can easily overpower a cat! If the going gets tough, he can always throw it down the chute The premise of a talking tom is interesting though...
Agreed with dpg
Also he can easily overpower a cat!
If the going gets tough, he can always throw it down the chute
The premise of a talking tom is interesting though…
See lessWhen a grieving Matt returns back from his travels, he must find a way to shut up the blackmailer that is threatening to reveal his shocking secret to the love of his life; his dead brothers widow.
When audience is quite open to his marrying the widow (since I am) you risk writing an antagonist instead with his current goal (to find a way to silence the blackmailer....why not go to the cops?)It would be a shocking secret if he had a hand in his brother's death (then again, not what a protagoniRead more
When audience is quite open to his marrying the widow (since I am) you risk writing an antagonist instead with his current goal (to find a way to silence the blackmailer….why not go to the cops?)
It would be a shocking secret if he had a hand in his brother’s death (then again, not what a protagonist would do)
Drop the name for word economy.
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