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When an art fraud investigator receives a package containing a stolen diamond from a man claiming to be her long-lost brother, she discovers that her father masterminded an international diamond heist and then travels to Geneva and underground catacombs in the Siberia wilderness to locate the stolen diamonds and return them to their rightful owner in order to save her father, who she thought was dead, from the consequences
Just clarity I would drop "art" as there isn't really an art fraud division in the police, it is normally just fraud. Plus the art and diamond seem to have no connection. Thrust on a journey seems wrong. I would use thrust to demonstrate a start of none stop action "thrust into a fight to the death"Read more
Just clarity I would drop “art” as there isn’t really an art fraud division in the police, it is normally just fraud. Plus the art and diamond seem to have no connection.
Thrust on a journey seems wrong. I would use thrust to demonstrate a start of none stop action “thrust into a fight to the death”. Most journeys are even paced.
Are all these things linked if so, describe how. Does the cryptic glue lead her believe that her family is involved? Why head there, what is she hoping to learn or achieve. Why wouldn’t she just let local authorities handle it? I’ll assume it is looking bad for her family and she hopes to clear their name. As an example.
After receive a package containing a stolen diamond and a cryptic message from her dead brother a fraud detective heads to Siberia to discover the truth and prevent her family from being implicated in an international cold case.
A little wordy but it show direct links between the elements.
I can see what you are trying to achieve but there isn’t enough story to allow me to see what I would be getting.
See lessA woman whose mother was murdered when she was a child of twelve, is now, fifteen years later, working as a detective and still pursuing her mother's killer, who, it turns out, is closer than she thinks.
What I think everyone is trying to say is, "What is the movie about?". You have given us the background, but what are series of events driven by her desires and what is standing in her way? Fifteen years after her mother?s murder, a detective continues to pursue the killer, she is torn between revenRead more
What I think everyone is trying to say is, “What is the movie about?”. You have given us the background, but what are series of events driven by her desires and what is standing in her way?
Fifteen years after her mother?s murder, a detective continues to pursue the killer, she is torn between revenge and fear of the truth when evidence leads to her family”.
I don’t know your story, but you see where I am headed.
See lessWith the mysterious arrival of a stolen diamond, a forensic investigator goes on a quest to Siberia to uncover a decades-old international crime linked to her lost family
There is a slight tone difference in her going or being sent. You can take advantage of that. "Quest" can police are a little disjointed. How does the arrival of the diamond connect and trigger her actions? This may seem a lot to achieve but it sells the story.
There is a slight tone difference in her going or being sent. You can take advantage of that. “Quest” can police are a little disjointed. How does the arrival of the diamond connect and trigger her actions?
This may seem a lot to achieve but it sells the story.
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