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After offering a kidney to her sister they discover they were both adopted. They go on a search for family and a kidney based only on their Mum’s old diary.PS Adoptive parents are dead, can’t see how to fit that in.
Thanks you all the help and feedback. Glad other people something in the story.
Thanks you all the help and feedback. Glad other people something in the story.
See lessOn the eve of his gay uncle?s anniversary dinner, Marcus must again struggle with alcohol and the impact it continues to have on the family.
Keep going with this. Everyone you meet would have a different take on this story. I would like to think the only people that didn't give up on him was his Gay Uncles. They know what being judged is all about. This is the loyalty that triggers his decision. His sobriety is the gift he wants to giveRead more
Keep going with this. Everyone you meet would have a different take on this story. I would like to think the only people that didn’t give up on him was his Gay Uncles. They know what being judged is all about. This is the loyalty that triggers his decision. His sobriety is the gift he wants to give them.
Like I said, I don’t know your story. But it would be a fun world to play in as a writer.
See lessAfter offering a kidney to her sister they discover they were both adopted. They go on a search for family and a kidney based only on their Mum’s old diary.PS Adoptive parents are dead, can’t see how to fit that in.
Kidney donation is a fairly robust and automated process in many countries. A Economica Professor got a Nobel Prize for coming up with a solution to increasing te likelihood of find a match. That being said your highest chance is finding someone in your own family that will be a match, which is theRead more
Kidney donation is a fairly robust and automated process in many countries. A Economica Professor got a Nobel Prize for coming up with a solution to increasing te likelihood of find a match.
That being said your highest chance is finding someone in your own family that will be a match, which is the motivation for finding the sick sisters Mum.
Besides the logline the only other story element I have is the sick sister calling off the search. She become resigned to dying and finding her birth mum would prove they were not really sisters. She wants to die as a her sister than die trying to be someone else.
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