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After offering a kidney to her sister they discover they were both adopted. They go on a search for family and a kidney based only on their Mum’s old diary.PS Adoptive parents are dead, can’t see how to fit that in.
Perfect. Thanks I was attack it wrong. I was looking at the relationship from one side. A relationship is two sided. This makes my story a two hander.
Perfect. Thanks I was attack it wrong. I was looking at the relationship from one side. A relationship is two sided. This makes my story a two hander.
See lessAfter tipping off police to his brother’s latest heist, a torn man must struggle to escape the consequences while keeping the loot; but when his brother is released on bail, he must learn where his true loyalty lies before losing the people most dear to him.
These emotional stakes are a little vague, who are these people? Being specific is all important as it helps set tone. His wife, has different tone to his kids and completely different to friends. How does he lose them? Are they going to be killed? I need to know how things will happen? What are theRead more
These emotional stakes are a little vague, who are these people? Being specific is all important as it helps set tone. His wife, has different tone to his kids and completely different to friends.
How does he lose them? Are they going to be killed?
I need to know how things will happen? What are the consequences?
Is crime the family business?
These questions are the best advice I can offer at the moment.
See lessOn the eve of his gay uncle?s anniversary dinner, Marcus must again struggle with alcohol and the impact it continues to have on the family.
With most stories there needs to be a believable incident to trigger change, especially in stories of addiction. Gay Uncles cool, but is the anniversary enough of a trigger? Perhaps he is on his last chance with the family? Perhaps he is using this party to prove to them he isn't a complete train wrRead more
With most stories there needs to be a believable incident to trigger change, especially in stories of addiction. Gay Uncles cool, but is the anniversary enough of a trigger? Perhaps he is on his last chance with the family? Perhaps he is using this party to prove to them he isn’t a complete train wreck?
Getting sober is a goal, but why is it his goal? Why now? What are the special challenges? Get sober is an everyday story, what makes this compelling?
Just an example (I don’t know your story)
Desparate to get his life back together a twenty something alcoholic tries to cut ties with his drunk life so he can announce his sobriety at his gay uncles anniversary.
Hope this helps.
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