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After offering a kidney to her sister they discover they were both adopted. They go on a search for family and a kidney based only on their Mum’s old diary.PS Adoptive parents are dead, can’t see how to fit that in.
DPG, the thing that salvages the story is the following. Healthy sister is keen to continue when they face a sent back. Sick sister wants to go home. They argue, sick sister is worried about how the new family will act, she also is too sick to handle meeting new people, she says "I don't want to strRead more
DPG, the thing that salvages the story is the following.
Healthy sister is keen to continue when they face a sent back. Sick sister wants to go home. They argue, sick sister is worried about how the new family will act, she also is too sick to handle meeting new people, she says “I don’t want to struggle around people who think they obligated. I want to go home, please, I just want to die as your sister”.
See lessAfter offering a kidney to her sister they discover they were both adopted. They go on a search for family and a kidney based only on their Mum’s old diary.PS Adoptive parents are dead, can’t see how to fit that in.
So far my story exists only with the sisters. Their struggle is the story. I can see an ending where they never find the other family.
So far my story exists only with the sisters. Their struggle is the story. I can see an ending where they never find the other family.
See lessAfter offering a kidney to her sister they discover they were both adopted. They go on a search for family and a kidney based only on their Mum’s old diary.PS Adoptive parents are dead, can’t see how to fit that in.
Thanks DPG, I am struggling with the adopted family. I have a bucket of sibling story elements. I'll cross the family meeting issues if the story leads me there. Your comment proves (to me) that an idea is not as valuable as people think. You read my line and see the clash of two families, I see twoRead more
Thanks DPG,
I am struggling with the adopted family. I have a bucket of sibling story elements. I’ll cross the family meeting issues if the story leads me there.
Your comment proves (to me) that an idea is not as valuable as people think. You read my line and see the clash of two families, I see two sister trying to save one.
Time to hits Celtx cards and start planning.
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