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  1. Posted: August 4, 2015In: Public

    A retired golf enthusiast is scammed out of his life savings and a country club membership, but when he sees an old man die and moves up to number five on the waiting list, he devises a killer plan to jump to #1

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on August 5, 2015 at 8:08 am

    I was going refer to "the axe" the film about a someone killing themselves into a job. Find the main goal and build your line around that. Could be fun.

    I was going refer to “the axe” the film about a someone killing themselves into a job. Find the main goal and build your line around that. Could be fun.

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  2. Posted: July 31, 2015In: Public

    in the near future a Government sponsored torturer is using his position to steal information and money from death row inmates. He is unaware that his next prisoner is an undercover agent sent to trap him.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on August 4, 2015 at 5:19 pm

    Think corrupt cop being trapped by internal affairs. Cop = Torturer. Internal Affairs = police raids, the thing used to trap corrupt cop, like a bag of cocaine = info undercover agent has. The confusion is why the logline is difficult.

    Think corrupt cop being trapped by internal affairs. Cop = Torturer. Internal Affairs = police raids, the thing used to trap corrupt cop, like a bag of cocaine = info undercover agent has.

    The confusion is why the logline is difficult.

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  3. Posted: July 31, 2015In: Public

    in the near future a Government sponsored torturer is using his position to steal information and money from death row inmates. He is unaware that his next prisoner is an undercover agent sent to trap him.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on August 4, 2015 at 3:15 pm

    Fair enough. I am working off my phone. So my explanation was a bit crappy. The Farm is working with criminal to undermine the government torture program. The reason they are keen to get info from this new prisoner is his possible connection to The Farm. But in reality it is a trap for the torturerRead more

    Fair enough. I am working off my phone. So my explanation was a bit crappy. The Farm is working with criminal to undermine the government torture program. The reason they are keen to get info from this new prisoner is his possible connection to The Farm.

    But in reality it is a trap for the torturer who is really part of The Farm. As viewers we can see The Farm being dismantled. We know it is because of what we are hearing.

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